Just when I thought I hit rock bottom, someone handed me a shovel.
The hardest scene I’ve written was just as above, having dinner. My two female character needed to have a ‘chat’. One of those read-between-the-lines kind of conversations that women can do so well with veiled animosity. This chapter took me F.O.R.E.V.E.R. to get it right because I wanted you to love Gwen as well as Connie.
Small snippet:“Master Tane is very generous.” Gwen eyed me from across the table. “You need to get use to addressing him by that title.”
I snorted then bit into my supper.
She set her half-eaten pastry on the plate. “I don’t understand. You are aware of the bond you share with him?”
“You don’t like him.”
“Why did you agree to the bond?”