By Maureen L. Bonatch
That love-ly time of year is right around the corner, that’s
right, Valentine’s Day. Whether you’re in love, looking for love or
reading about it, first impressions, and first lines are something you can only
do once. And hopefully it's something leaving you wanting more.
Believe it or not, there are entire websites devoted to pick-ups lines, just to get that ‘hook’ in
there.
Here's just a few pick-up
lines from pickup lines galore:
I can’t remember much about the movie Jerry Maguire, except for that
line.
Let’s see if you can:
Name these other
‘movie one liners’
(no
peeking at the answers below!)
- “My momma always said, life was like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re gonna get.”
- “Nobody puts Baby in the corner.”
- “Frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn.”
- “Here’s Johnny.”
Answers:
With books, you'll hear about 'the hook'. The first line has to grab you, hook you in, keep you reading.
That’s why, as a writer, I work hard to get it just right. I’m working on a 85,000 word manuscript,
spending 80% of the time, okay maybe that’s an exaggeration…75% J
of the time, on the first page…the first line.
Because if book gets put down before they’ve gotten past there, they
might not be going back to finish it...because first impressions mean a lot.
Name these ‘book
hooks’:
(no
peeking at the answers below!)
- “Call me Ishmael.”
- “You better not tell anybody but God.”
- “I stood in the shadows of a deserted shop front across from The Blood and Brew Pub, trying not to be obvious as I tugged my black leather pants up where they belonged.”
- “When I wake up, the other side of the bed is cold.”
Answers:
1. HermanMelville, Moby Dick 2. Alice Walker, The
Color Purple 3 Kim Harrison, Dead WitchWalking 4.Suzanne Collins, The Hunger Games
Feel free to share some of your ‘hooks’. Whether it be the pick-up line that got you
your love, or caused you to run for the hills, or your favorite line from a
cherished movie or book.
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