I’m continuing my mini-series on world building. Like my
books, I didn’t plan a series. It just sort of happened.
Let’s concentrate on daily life. Think about your own. What
do you do each day? Your routines. Now think about the world in your story.
What routines does your main character go through first thing in the morning?
Not to be indelicate, but where do they go to the toilet? An
outhouse, a garderobe, a fancy en suite bathroom?
Next think about clothes. Everyday wear along with special event
clothing. The character’s job would impact his/her attire. In my science
fiction romance The Chameleon,
Jileena wears frilly, floaty dresses that make her seem inconsequential, a real
bubble-head—the image her father wants her to project as his spy. Away from his
influence, her clothing reflects her serious side, precisely the image she
wants the hero to see. As she changes, so do her clothes. In my WIP, The Protector, my heroine owns a tavern
in an old-west style colony on the Outer Rim. She wears what’s common out on
the frontier, unisex rugged shirt and trousers, sturdy shoes.
What does your character call meals? Breakfast, lunch,
dinner? Second breakfast? Tea? What about food? If your story takes place on
Earth, the foods would probably have names the reader is familiar with. In her St.
Helen’s series (Amaryllis, Orchid, Zinnia), Jayne Castle’s inhabitants’ ancestors originally came from
Earth. She combines the names of Earth-based foods to approximate the taste of
native foods, like pear-berry pie.
But what if your story takes place in a completely alien
environment? Using made-up names alone can confuse readers unless you give them
clues. For example, mashed plantens
or scrambled spherix eggs. You could
have your character slicing enfils
and selba then arranging the crisp
vegetables on a plate as I did in The
Chameleon.
Occupation. Does your character leave home for work or work
from home? How does he get to work? Public transportation or private vehicle?
Or is he so wealthy he doesn’t need to work? If so, what does he do all day? Play
sports, cards, hang out with friends?
I’ve read that writers build their world in basically two
ways: top down or bottom up. I tend to do the latter. Since I’m a pantser (as
opposed to someone who plots first), I build my world as I need it—usually by
asking myself why. As my characters develop and the story progresses, my world
starts to evolve. Writers who plot first have all their ducks in a row before
beginning to write. That is, they imagine the big picture first then narrow
down the focus to the character. Whichever type of writer you are sort of
determines how you will build your world.
As always, you know much more than the reader needs to. You
can (probably should) have tons of notes on how everything in your world works—especially
if your story turns into a series. I have a separate file on all the details of
my world. If I didn’t, I’d forget those pesky little details. When I learn how
to use Scrivener, I’m sure keeping details handy will be much easier.
Here are a couple of sites with a lot more information on
world building. The first one is courtesy of author Greta van der Rol. http://ed.ted.com/lessons/how-to-build-a-fictional-world-kate-messner
This is a great, little (6.25 minutes) video.
The next one is courtesy of my critique partner Jolana
Malkston who found it when I couldn’t. http://www.sfwa.org/2009/08/fantasy-worldbuilding-questions/
Have fun in your world. If you do, I’ll bet your readers
will enjoy it, too.
Diane Burton writes science fiction romance. She's currently working on the third book in her Outer Rim series, The Protector.
6 comments:
Great blog with lots to think about, especially about seeing a world through the eyes of the character and understanding what their daily life is like.
And I love that list of world-building questions Patricia Wrede put together and posted at Sfwa. So much there to think about.
I find Patricia Wrede's world building questions extremely helpful. Sometimes I focus so much on the big, fun details of the world I'm creating that I tend to overlook the less exciting details of every day life. You gave me food for thought. Very insightful post, Diane.
Wonderful information! I think we often overlook the important details but even if we don't use them in the story, we need to know about them!
Thanks, Alexis. I love Patricia Wrede's questions. Very thorough.
Hi, Jolana. Since I write from the bottom up, I tend to think about the little details. Unfortunately, I can get hung up on them and forget the big picture. ;)
Melissa, you are so right. I have LOTS of details (and keep adding to them) in my Outer Rim world. Each story brings something new, and I find out a little more. I think I'm going to have to stay in that world for a while. LOL
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