Fiction writing authors create
worlds for their characters to inhabit. Authors who write contemporary, be it
in the past or the present, must surround their characters with fictional
settings. Those of us who dabble in the paranormal realm usually have the
additional task of placing their paranormal characters in among normal
people. After all, most vampires, shifters, demons and witches don't normally
exist openly in the masses. Therefore, they exist hidden from view in their own
little world. The setting may be in a remote location away from urban places or
in may exist in a metropolitan setting but secreted from the surrounding
society.
Those who write science fiction, especially if the story takes place
off planet, often create vast worlds that encompass planets, solar systems,
galaxies or even complete universes.
Some authors supply very detailed descriptions
of the worlds they create. Some just paint a general picture and let the reader
envision their own view of the world as they see it. Some authors have a talent
for describing their worlds in great detail, some, like myself, struggle in
doing so. My question to readers and writers alike, since most writers are
readers as well, which do you prefer, detailed or generalized?
Gary Stillman, writing as G.E. Stills dabbles in many genres among them are paranormal, contemporary and science fiction.
Two of his video book trailers are.
Blood Rage
New Beginnings
Excerpt from the story New Beginnings.
( CAUTION STRONG LANGUAGE)
She pulled into a business complex
containing a dozen small offices. The company name was stenciled on a tinted
glass door of one of the suites. Dani, with Marci following, entered the
office. A half dozen chairs lined the wall on her left. To her right was a
counter with a middle-aged woman behind it watching a computer monitor and
typing. A single closed door was the only feature along the wall opposite the
entrance. The setting reminded Dani of a small doctor's office waiting area.
She stepped up to the counter and peered at the woman.
"Good afternoon," The
woman greeted her.
"Hi. I'm Dani Myer, I have an
appointment."
The woman smiled. "Yes you do.
Is this your girlfriend Marci with you?"
"Yes," Marci said.
The woman picked up a phone and
spoke quietly into it then hung up. "Mr. Smith will see you now Dani. Go
through that door in the back." She turned to Marci. "He will see you
when he's finished interviewing Dani. In the meantime have a seat over
there." She indicated the six seats.
Dani stepped into the inner office.
A single padded chair faced a large desk. Seated behind the desk was a slightly
balding grey haired man. Dani quickly glanced around the office. A number of
paintings of island settings decorated the walls.
"Have a seat Ms. Myer,"
the man said.
While she sat, he opened a folder
on the desk and removed a single sheet of paper.
After a brief silence Dani asked,
"May I inquire what this reward you speak of involves?"
Mr. Smith smiled at her. "If
you meet the conditions my company requires, we intend to offer you an
all-expenses paid, seven day trip to a private tropical island in the
Pacific."
Stunned, Dani waited for him to
continue in silence. He slid the sheet of paper and a pen across the desk to
her.
"First things first. This is a
non-discloser agreement you must sign before I'm able to provide any more
details. It's a simple agreement that you will not discuss anything that is
talked about or filled out during this or subsequent meetings. The one
exception is, you may talk to Ms. Davis provided you both are accepted for this
offer."
Dani quickly read the agreement.
Just as he had stated it was a standard agreement. She signed it and slid it
back to him.
"Thank you. You've been
selected to receive this offer due to your high academic standing and your
physical appearance."
Dani quirked an eyebrow at his
statement of physical appearance.
"I realize the latter part of
my statement and some of the questions could well be considered sexist.
Nonetheless, they and the questions you will answer, have a bearing on your
selection. I will remind you of the nondisclosure agreement you signed."
"Okay."
He removed two more sheets of paper from the
folder and gave them to her. "This is a questionnaire for you to fill out.
Please answer each question honestly and to the best of your ability."
She scanned the questions quickly
and raised an eyebrow. Some of them were highly personal and indeed sexist.
"I'm not certain I want to answer all of these."
"I understand your reluctance,
but I must tell you all the questions must be answered. My company is going to
considerable expense with this offer. It is being extended to a limited number
of people, both male and female at colleges around the nation and throughout
the world, of which only thirty will be selected. You are free to decline of
course at which point this meeting is over."
Wow,
I guess he told me.
"Can you tell me a little more
about this trip?"
Mr. Smith rubbed two fingers over his
chin. "Think of it as a type of spring break like the ones that take place
in Florida or other locals. Then picture it taking place on a tropical island
with only thirty guests and an extensive wait staff. You will be able to swim,
sunbathe, participate in sporting activities, play games, drink, and party for
a week at no expense to you. During that week you will be treated like royalty
with spa treatments, excellent food, and the list goes on."
"Sounds like fun. When is this
trip?"
"You graduate at the end of
May, the trip takes place in June."
Dani nodded and the conversation
ended while she answered the questions. She finished and handed them back to
him.
"Congratulations Ms. Myer.
There is one last thing." He handed her a slip of paper. "This is the
address for a lab we are working with. Please go there sometime in the next
week. You will be required to provide a blood and urine sample at that time to
complete the next step in the process. Again this is personal, but the results
of the lab will tell us if you are healthy and free of any type of communicable
disease, sexual or other types."
"You're kidding."
"No, we're not. We further ask
that you not engage in any form of sexual activity before the trip. If you pass
this screening, you will be contacted with further details. You are of course
free to opt out of this offer at any time before May."
For a moment, Dani considered
telling Mr. Smith to fuck off and walking out but then the picture of herself
basking on a beach and being pampered for a week flashed through her mind. Okay, not having sex is doable. The
thought of the mountains of snow outside was the final deciding factor.
She sighed. "What else?"
He smiled. "That's all for
now. Once we have the lab results we'll contact you."
"Okay. May I ask who owns this
company?"
"You may ask, but I have
strict instructions not to divulge any names. Let me just say this company is a
part of a large corporation owned primarily by a man who is a well-known
billionaire. This company will ask nothing in return for this reward that you
do not willingly offer." Mr. Smith stood and offered his hand.
"Again, congratulations and I wish you the best Ms. Myer."
Dani stood and accepted his
handshake. She left the office and waited while Marci had her interview. On the
drive back to their dorm and into the evening, they discussed what had taken
place.
"That interview was just
fucking weird on so many levels," Marci said. "Psychological,
medical, social, personal and others. They were certainly not the type I would
have expected to answer to win a vacation trip or even for a job
application."
"I agree but the thought of
seven days of splendor after four years is slaving is too tempting to pass
up."
"Especially when it's all paid
for." Marci smiled. "I noted during the interview he said no sex
before the trip. He didn't however say, no sex during that week and he did
mention there would be men there. I intend to fuck my brains out during that
week." Marci grinned.
Dani returned her grin. "We are being
judged on physical appearance and I assume that includes the men, so yeah,
fucking sounds like a plan and abstention will increase horniness."
Marci raised her bottled water in a toast.
"Here's to hoping each of us passes the screening and to fucking on the
beach and everywhere else on that island."
Dani tapped her bottle to Marci's
and giggled. "Here, here."
5 comments:
Great post, Gary. We all create the world our characters inhabit. For my mystery series, I created a small, Lake Michigan resort town, similar to many along the west coast of Michigan--named the streets, parks, businesses, etc. With my sci-fi romances, I also create a world. Along with what I have to come up with for my mysteries, I get to have more fun by creating customs, religions, governments, even climate. Did I mention I love creating worlds? LOL
World building is the best! I think it's easy to get a general scope of things though, and think that's enough. We often forget that the more detailed the aspects, the more real the world feels. I'm reading one right now that reminded me of all this, but then the plot fell apart. *sigh*
I love worlds that have their own rules and give the reader new things to learn, new cultures to explore. It's part of the joy in reading paranormal for me!
I've always believed in My World, My Rules . . . as long as you can make it believable! The familiar setting that coaxes the reader into accepting the fantastic exists within it is my favorite part of the paranormal!
Yes and yes, the fun for most speculative fiction writers, or at least part of it, is creating the world within the world and making sure the reader will believe it!
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