Getting the Details Right
When writing a paranormal fantasy
you have the great potential to create your own worlds. You can walk around in
it. Create new acquaintances, and make new friends and allies. You’re
comfortable in your own skin and your imagination has no limits. I love those
kinds of stories.
My stories are paranormal
historical, primarily written in the medieval time, and you have to get the
details right. You have to learn the customs, the food, clothing and
traditions. It all comes down to research. Sometimes it takes more time to do
the research than actually writing the story, but those details help to create
the story. Not to say that my characters don’t break convention. What fun would
that be if they didn’t? They are led by need and desires that would make the
church blush.
My contemporary suspense is
set in Chicago. I literally have to walk the streets of downtown to get the
culture of a big city, what it smells like, look like, and feel like. Crossing
a city street is a talent all its own. My favorite time to be in Chicago is
during the Christmas season. The lights, the smell of coffee coming out of the
coffee shops, and the smell of food as it puffs out the restaurant doors as
patrons go in and out.
I’m working on a time travel
story now, and I get to use everything I learned from both time lines and
combined them together. I have copious notes of both medieval Europe and
present day Chicago. All the research I did is helping this story move much more
quickly and allows me to compare and contrast the two times periods and explore
their differences and the conflict it creates between the hero and the heroine.
The heroine finds herself in
the middle of the woods after being chased through a portal by two drug
dealers. When men in armor ride up to her she thinks she had somehow found herself
at a renaissance fair. She was unaware she had actually traveled back in time.
Here is a little taste of
Quin and Grace’s first meeting.
Thank
God, somebody who can help me. A
group of men were wearing chainmail and metal helmets.
Grace let out a chuckle. “Sorry,” she said as
she raised her hand. “I don’t mean to laugh, but you guys look great. Your
costumes look so authentic. You’ve taken the medieval thing to a whole new
level. Is the renaissance fair nearby?”
One of the men stepped down from his horse.
The others moved around her in a tight circle. When he removed his helmet Grace’s
heart tripped up. He had to be most beautiful man she ever saw in her whole
life. Like Chris Hemsworth in the Thor movie. His blond hair fell just below
his shoulders. Even though he was covered in chainmail there was no hiding the
strong body beneath it. All he needed was his hammer. He was something right
out of a romance novel.
“Who are you and what are you doing here?”
First thought. Handsome or not, what a jerk! There was no Hello, or are you lost, can I
help you in some way, just ‘Who are you?’ like I stepped on his cat.
“Sorry, I didn’t realize I was trespassing” She
said curtly. “Can you tell me where I can find the nearest road?” She raised
her phone over her head to see it still reading ‘No Service.’
“Do you guys get cell service out here? I
can’t seem to get any bars.” The ringing of metal scraping metal set her teeth
on edge. Handsome had his sword pointed it at her chest.
“Give me the box.”
“Not on your life,” she said, pressing her phone
to her chest.
“I assure you it won’t be my life. Now hand
me the box.”
He towered over her, but most people did
since she was only five-two. She gave up her resolve then slapped the phone in
his hand. “Fine. Happy now?”
His stone like expression made her wary.
“Your bag.”
“What is this, a hold up?” Stone silence. She
blew out a puff of air and slid the bag off her shoulder and handed it to him.
He in turn tossed it to one of the men behind her. “Hey! Be careful with that.
It has my computer in it.” She turned back to him. “Now what? You have my
things.”
He looked her up and down. Not in a creepy
way, but like he was sizing up a sandwich. “You are oddly dressed.”
“It’s called jeans and a leather jacket. Look
I’m not interested in your little roll playing game. All I want are directions
out of here and you can give me back my things and carry on with your reenactment, thing.”
Suddenly, two arrows thumped down at her feet
Thor didn’t hesitate. He picked her up and threw her in the saddle and jumped on
behind her. The small band of men broke their circle and flanked them on both
sides.
Arrows came out of nowhere. “What is going
on?” she yelled
“An ambush.”
“You mean those arrows are real?”
“Why would you question that?”
“Right now I can’t think of, why.”
He pressed her head down and lowered his body
around her like a shield. Her heart beat like a jackhammer. The saddle pressed
against her hip. This wasn’t as
comfortable as it looked on TV. “I’m tired of this game. You’ve had your
fun, now let me go!” She tried to shift herself in position to jump but he held
her too tightly.
“Sit still, woman, I am trying to save your
life.”
“Knock it off, or I’ll press charges for
kidnapping. Now let me go!”
If there was a time you could
go back to where would it be?
3 comments:
I love time travels! Especially when a modern day heroine winds up in medieval times and has to make that adjustment. So much fun.
When did you start writing this? Fun!
I, too, love time travels. I would like to go back in time to see my parents in love. I'm sure they were in later times (like when I was growing up and older), but not stars in the eyes in love. That's a great excerpt, Victoria. I hope you enjoy writing it.
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