By Maureen L. Bonatch
Nanny has been gone for many
years, but these simple things evoke my memory of her.
Visualizing a Character
I visualize Nanny's appearance in my mind, but I don’t describe
her that way. I could describe her typical cotton dress, and her ever-present panty hose rolled down to ball just under the knee. I could detail her cropped, curly, white
hair, and heavy glasses perched on the end of her nose. Or how she always cut
the sides of her shoes to make room for her bunions.
Building a Setting
I could describe how she depicted her devout roman Catholic beliefs in her
home. Or perhaps how she was always in the kitchen. That her freezer was never without ice cream and how she opened her heart, and her kitchen, to feed every person that walked in the door.
Focus on Key Characteristics
But those aren’t the first things that come to mind. It’s
the butterscotch candy resting in the glass dish in the parlor, and the mounds of butter stacked on a slice of thick bread that stuck with me for all these
years. Those would be key elements if I was making my Nanny into a character.
The rest might be essential in developing character backstory to
help me understand the character better, but sometimes just a few little things can
make a character memorable.
My Writing Process
When a new character introduces themselves, they get
right to the point. They start telling me their story. I might notice a few
memorable characteristics in their personality, body language, or speech
mannerisms and—off I go to wrap the character around those traits. It’s
kind of like I found the egg and work backwards to find the chicken that
created it.
True confessions of a panster.
If you’re a heavy
plotter, you might find this next paragraph upsetting and want to skip it. Since
my writing begins with these few key elements, I’ve sometimes discovered I’ve written an entire book without identifying the color of the heroine, or the hero’s, hair
or eyes. That my stories lacks those key descriptions.
That’s because as a reader, I like
to picture some of those characteristics myself. How I see them. Everyone doesn’t read/write that
way, so I keep that in mind and go back and add some extra details.
In your Reading and/or Writing, What
Comes First—the Egg, or the Chicken? (I.e: The Character or the Characteristics)
Author Bio: Maureen Bonatch grew up in
small town Pennsylvania and her love of the four seasons—hockey, biking, sweat
pants and hibernation—keeps her there. While immersed in writing or reading
paranormal romance and fantasy, she survives on caffeine, wine, music, and
laughter. A feisty Shih Tzu keeps her in line. Find Maureen on her website, Facebook & Twitter
