Showing posts with label #amwriting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #amwriting. Show all posts

Sunday, March 10, 2024

Crafting the Future: Why Writers Should Embrace AI by Keri Kruspe

 

As a writer, I love exploring and learning new things. And lately, I’ve been caught up in the AI craze, exploring what it can do for me in my writing career. But there are some of those in our community who cry foul, claiming AI will soon take over the creative process of fiction writing. Why, they say, pay a human when all it takes is a prompt in an AI software to get you the same thing?

Au contrair, mon frere. In my humble opinion, AI programs (like ChatGPT, Sudowrite, and Claude) are mere tools that help a writer, not replace them. Much like a typewriter back in the day. It won’t hinder the creative process, but instead enhance the experience. With that in mind, let’s take a quick look at what I mean.

What AI Can't Mimic



One of the most important things to remember is we’re humans… writing to entertain/inform other humans. Who, but us, has that kind of insight? Only we can tap into the unlimited variety of human emotions and the baggage we carry with us in all the complexities of being human. AI lacks this innate understanding of our behavior. That gives up the upper hand at creating characters with authentic feelings and flaws, as well as the importance of emotionally growing. Throughout our lives, we’ve wallowed in a plethora of emotions like joy, sorrow, love, coupled with an abundance of longing for something else, something different that only a human can experience.

            Another exciting example of we can do and AI can’t is our innate urge to play with language. This is our palette… what we color the world with. As a writer of SciFi romance, I love coming up with alien and diverse ways to say something. Just recently, I had to ponder what an ancient person (who traveled in time to our present) would say in an exclamation. I’m going to keep it clean here… but some modern man won’t say “Great Caesars Ghost!” (for one thing, Ceaser hadn’t been born yet). So, I had my guy shout “By Tiamat’s titties!”. And I also took a pretty common cuss word that starts with a “f” and ends in a “k” and turned it around for an alien. They say fruk instead. I love coming up with unfamiliar words and phrases for my alien characters to use.

            Another thing I do is draw inspiration from the people I’ve met and work with over the years. In fact, one of my first books is loosely based on real life. Because I felt wronged/betrayed by someone back then, I had the good guy shoot the jerk right between the eyes. Boy, I gotta tell you; that was immensely satisfying. Ah, revenge. Remember, don’t do a writer wrong, they’ll take it out on you in a novel.

Leveraging Technology Wisely

As I mentioned in the beginning, AI is a tool. While it can be used for such mundane tasks as grammar check and research, I love to use it as a writing buddy who is there whenever I need them. Especially since I wake up at the crack of almost-dawn (4:30am to get in two hours of writing before I have to leave for work). I use AI not only as a critique partner, but someone who never gets impatient with me when I ask questions I get stuck on. Sometimes more than once.

            For instance, this morning I was writing a scene in my newest novel and wondered what a tree would look like on a planet where a civilization of panther-like beings of an advanced technology lived. The AI gave me more than one scenario to choose from. So, what I did was combine what I liked best about everything it suggested and came up with something new and different.

To take it up a step, I asked it what one of those creatures would dress like on that type of planet. It came up with several wardrobe suggestions. But the funnest part (yeah, I like the word funnest) was asking it to create a picture depicting this alien.

            And here’s what it came up with:


            Cool, eh? As I planned this blog, I asked the AI to create a picture for the header (see above). When the AI was done, this is what it told me:

            “Here’s an image for your blog post. This visual aims to encapsulate the essence of human creativity and the enduring value of authentic writing in the digital age. It symbolizes the balance between traditional writing methods and modern AI technology, inviting writers to explore and assert their unique voices.”

            Can’t argue with that!

Other Benefits

Here’s an outline of some of the other benefits how an AI companion can help a writer be more productive:

  • Research Assistant: AI can analyze vast amounts of data while providing insights
  • Customization: With some programs, you can customize your AI to adapt to your particular writing style.
  • Enhanced Productivity: It can automate repetitive tasks like grammar checks, proofreading, and formatting. 

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Last Thoughts

Will AI replace authors?

As of now, I doubt AI will replace authors any time soon. Most techies and web gurus claim artificial intelligence cannot totally replace a human writer’s insight or their creativity. There is a huge market for creative writers to put themselves out there, to share their experiences with the world.

What we should concentrate on as AI advances is we, as writers, better learn how to use this wondrous innovation. Discover how to strike a balance between automation and human creativity. Use that available technology to save time so you can set your creative juices free. Let it help you weave the magic only you can create to take your writing craft to a higher level.

While AI evolves and algorithms sharpen, remember this: you are irreplaceable. The world doesn’t need another robotic rendition; it craves your authenticity. Embrace your quirks, your scars, and your hard-earned laugh lines.


AI may be the brush, but you are the artist.



Friday, November 10, 2023

Myths to Pages: Unveiling Hidden Legends by Keri Kruspe

 


Whenever anyone asks me why I adore paranormal romance, I’m completely honest with them. With things around us getting crazier every day, to keep what little sanity I have left I’ve got to have an outlet where I can escape in a realm where reality and imagination intertwine. A place full of captivating stories that transport me beyond the ordinary. And I’m not talking just about well-known paranormal creatures like vampires and werewolves, even though they are still some of my favorites. Besides them there exists a treasure trove of lesser-known myths, legends, and cultural folklore that are waiting to be unearthed and woven into the tapestry of the paranormal romance narratives.

Today we’ll embark on a journey of discovery and explore the art of how we can find and adapt these hidden gems into our own writing. My intent is to not only showcase how this genre is captivating readers with twists in their enchanting tales, but how we can weave them into our own stories.

At the end I’ll share some recommendations that got me started on this journey.

Unearthing Forgotten Legends

Orisha Deity



First, as a writer, how do we find new and exciting legends to delve into? In today’s ability to delve into any subject at the touch of a keyboard, it’s easy enough to examine other cultures we aren’t familiar with! Deep in the depths of thousands of ancient cultures as well as regional folklore, the world is brimming with stories that have yet to be told. If we go beyond the familiar tales of Western mythology, there are rich narratives of African, Asian, Indigenous, and other cultures. For instance, the Kitsune of Japanese folklore, shapeshifting fox spirits, offer a captivating twist on the classic shifter trope. The Yoruba tradition's Orisha deities, with their intricate personalities and powers, have intense tales that add layers of depth to any character. Just look at the thriving popularity of Japanese anime to see what I mean.

Best of all, by unearthing these forgotten legends, we can infuse any paranormal romance with a global mosaic that can’t help but attract a new base.

Weaving Cultural Authenticity

As with any new endeavor that involves a culture you aren’t familiar with, it's vital to approach them with sensitivity and respect. I know how excited I get when I’m researching a new idea. I try to understand the historical, cultural, and societal contexts where these myths originate. If you can, engage with experts and immerse yourself in their expertise. That way you not only enrich your writing but also honor the cultures that have nurtured these stories for generations.

Breathing Life into Characters


Hidden legends offer a trove of inspiration for character development. The figures within these myths often possess unique attributes, flaws, and motivations that can serve as a blueprint for any paranormal romance protagonists as well as the villains. For example, drawing from the Slavic myth of Rusalka, a water nymph can bring both love and danger to your story. She’s a complex character who struggles with her dual nature. Here’s an interplay of light and darkness that adds layers of complexity, making her more relatable and engaging to readers.



Redefining Supernatural Powers

This is one I struggle with all the time. How to I make this age-old legend and turn it into something new and exciting? Incorporating lesser-known myths lets me reimagine the supernatural powers that drive any character. The Irish Banshee, for instance, could have premonition powers that come with a haunting cost, adding depth and tension to any romantic journey.

Creating a Richer Story World

A paranormal romance isn't just about characters. It's also about the world they live in. Hidden legends can serve as the foundation for building intricate and immersive story worlds. Especially for someone like me who writes SciFi romance, a sub-genre under the paranormal umbrella. Without this key element, my romance adventures fall flat. I’ve got to work through the architecture, landscapes, and societies of other worlds that inspire my fictional settings. I may adapt elements like mystical forests, ancient temples, or ethereal realms as a backdrop where my romance unfolds. My goal is to take my readers in a world that is both magical as well as believable.

Tapping into Emotional Resonance

This is a biggie for me. One of the greatest advantages of our cultural legends lies in their ability to evoke deep emotions. Many of these stories are steeped in themes of love, sacrifice, betrayal, and longing—themes that resonate powerfully with readers. As a writer, I do my best to adapt these narratives so I can capture the essence of these emotional currents. My intent is to layer the narrative and infused them into the relationships, conflicts, and journeys of my heroes. By doing so, I strive to create a profound connection that lingers with readers long after they've turned the last page.

Conclusion

In the realm of paranormal romance, where imagination reigns supreme, the sky (or universe!) is the limit for creating boundless storytelling. By venturing beyond the well-trodden paths of popular mythology and delving into the hidden legends of cultures around the world, it’s easy to unearth a wealth of inspiration that can invigorate anyone’s writing. Keep in mind any adaptation requires diligence, respect, and creativity. But, oh the rewards are immeasurable. Now you’ll have a tapestry of characters, worlds, and emotions that captivate readers and breathe fresh life into the genre.

So, embark on this journey of discovery! Let the hidden legends guide your pen to create tales that enchant, intrigue, and touch the hearts of all who read them.

And, as promised, here is a small handful of some of my favorite paranormal romances that started me on my paranormal romance journey:


Leave your comments here... we'd all love to hear your recommendations!

Thursday, August 10, 2023

Expanding Horizons: The Benefits of a Writer Moving Beyond Kindle Unlimited by Keri Kruspe

 

With an exhilarating sense of adventure, I have made a momentous decision in my writing career—to venture beyond the confines of Kindle Unlimited exclusivity and embrace the vast world of readership. As a science fiction romance author, Kindle Unlimited has been instrumental in cultivating my audience, but I’m now ready to unlock a whole new realm of possibilities by going "wide." The path ahead holds immense promise and exciting advantages that I am eager to explore, ones that I simply can’t realize if I remain confined to a single platform.

Join me as I delve into the reasons driving this bold move, and witness the incredible opportunities that lie ahead on this literary odyssey.

Enhanced Visibility and Reach

While Amazon Kindle Unlimited offers a massive user base, the platform is saturated with a plethora of titles, making it challenging for any writer to stand out. By branching out to other online sites, I can tap into different readerships, increasing visibility and reach.

Platforms like Kobo, Nook, and Apple Books provide access to a diverse global audience that may not be active on Kindle Unlimited. These platforms have their own loyal readerships, that will enable me to connect with a wider demographic. Expanding this way can lead to increased discoverability and help build a dedicated fan base outside of Amazon's ecosystem.

Diversification of Income

While Amazon Kindle Unlimited provides a subscription-based model that compensates authors based on page reads, things have changed there. In an article by Dan Holloway from Alliance of Independent Authors in February of this year states “Kindle Unlimited raises UK subscriptions price by nearly 20%”. Will that increase in revenue be shared to the writers? Dan continues: “… payments from the 2014 launch to now. In that time, the payout per page read has dropped 23% from .58 of a cent to .43 of a cent.” He further explains, “And authors shouldn’t expect to see any benefit. Indeed, any increase in payout per page may be the result of fewer overall page views if subscriber numbers go down.”

Are per page reads a better income generator than selling an entire book? In an article in The Indie Life, John Coon explains his experience:

“I tested out one of my stories, In Hell’s Shadow, on Kindle Unlimited for three years before finally pulling it from KU at the end of March 2023. During that time, my story earned 454 total page reads. The revenue generated from that 3-year KU stint equaled less than 10 sales. Ironically, In Hell’s Shadow sold 62 copies outside of Kindle Unlimited during the same 3-year period. I’ve experienced considerable success going wide with all my other novels and short stories, gaining steady sales with a variety of other retailers over the past five years.”

Another advantage of diversifying my distribution channels is the multitude of options I can explore to get my books in front of a world-wide audience. Such as direct sales, individual e-book purchases, and even print-on-demand services.

To do that all I need is an author website (done!) or utilizing platforms like Smashwords or Draft2Digital (which is what I use) that allows me to sell books directly to readers. This not only offers greater control over pricing and marketing strategies but also enables me to retain a higher percentage of earnings. Additionally, expanding into print-on-demand services like IngramSpark or Lulu could grant opportunities for physical book sales, appealing to readers who prefer the experience of a printed novel.


Access to New Marketing Channels

While Kindle Unlimited provides promotional tools like Kindle Countdown Deals and Free Book Promotions, other platforms offer unique marketing strategies as well. Many online sites have dedicated newsletters, blogs, and author spotlights to help writers gain exposure to a broader audience. My goal this year is to explore what these other platforms offer.

By joining multiple platforms, I can take part in cross-promotions, guest blogging, or exclusive interviews, leveraging the promotional power of different communities. Engaging with new readers through social media platforms, forums, and mailing lists associated with these sites can generate valuable word-of-mouth buzz.

Let’s not forget to mention BookBub prefers a “wide” author in their Feature Deal promotions.

But the main reason to branch out is this: If my career lies in the hands of only one platform, what happens if they kick me out? Or, God forbid, Amazon decides to dump authors all together? Back when Amazon started, it was with books. Amazon worked hand in hand with their authors to build their reach. Now authors are just a small cog in their gigantic wheel.

Relying on one stream of income also leaves me vulnerable to the whim of that platform, limits growth to a wider audience and comes with a total lack of flexibility. I am an independent author for a reason… these are my stories and I don’t appreciate anyone telling me what I can or can’t do with them.  

Building a Brand Beyond Amazon

While Amazon is undeniably a dominant force in the publishing industry, solely relying on its platform can limit the visibility of my author's brand. By expanding to other online sites, I have the chance to extend my reach and enhance my professional credibility and brand to those who’ve I’ve never touched before.

At the same time, I’m hoping it will open other opportunities, such as speaking engagements, guest appearances, and invitations to participate in industry events. It has a good chance to help raise my profile and attract new readers and publishing opportunities.

Conclusion

While Amazon Kindle Unlimited undoubtedly offers advantages for all writers, venturing beyond this platform can unlock a plethora of benefits. I’ve published with Amazon for five years exclusively, hoping it would give me the chance to realize my dream of quitting a full-time job and making a living by my writing. In all that time, my sales and reads have remained stagnant. Time’s a wastin’ and staying with them doesn’t look my dream is going to happen there anytime soon.

So, I think I’ll take Albert Einstein’s advice. “The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results.”

Who am I to argue with a world renown genius?



Thursday, May 25, 2023

A Knight’s Paranormal Tale by Nancy Gideon


My two favorite vacays were to Las Vegas – a glittery fantasyland where time and belief is suspended. While staying at the medieval-themed Excalibur the first time, it was easy to pretend you’d slipped back into the past (nothing says medieval like eating chicken with your fingers!), into a world of gallantry and honor where brave knights participated in tournaments and carried the colors of their fair ladies. Just the kick I needed to develop the last book in my paranormal romance contract with BelleBooks, MIDNIGHT CRUSDADER, the final book in my vampire romance series, “Touched by Midnight.” Nothing says romance like a lovelorn noble who damns himself in order to follow his love through centuries to save her and, hopefully, break his curse. Now a detective on leave in the City That Never Sleeps to find and reclaim the future he was denied, Gabriel must do more than rescue his fair Naomi – he has to get her to remember him. As a new Peruvian temple rises on the Strip, the evil it houses stirs to life, becoming not only a threat to the star-crossed pair but to humanity, itself. Enjoy a taste . . .

Midnight Crusader (Touched by Midnight Series - Book 9)

Published: May 4, 2011
Length: 228 Pages

A love without end . . .
Having given up his mortal life to search for his lost love through the centuries, vampire Gabriel McGraw begins his final crusade to free her from an enemy’s grip against the glittery backdrop of Las Vegas. But is she the same woman he loved and lost or an equally dangerous foe who could betray all that he believes in?

Naomi Bright’s memories go back no farther than her arrival in Sin City. Does her hidden past conceal madness or a truth too terrible to be believed? Compulsion draws her toward a medieval fantasy world, and obsession to a man she instinctively knows but can’t remember.

Will finding the answers release her from her prison of fear? Or will it ensure that she loses everything - her life, her love . . . her soul?

“ . . . another enthralling and soul-stirring vampire romance.” —BookReview.com


 The Excerpt 

He sank back into the shadows, watching her confusion as she scanned the sidewalks for him. He stayed out of sight with an anguished purpose. He hadn’t meant to reveal himself to her, not so soon, not so spontaneously without planning the result.

But he had, and he had his answer.

He passed his hand across his eyes, covering the tender torment that came with beholding her image. The sound that escaped him was half strangled sob, half moan of longing.

She didn’t know him.

No recognition sparked her gaze. No awareness leapt at the sound of his name.

He meant nothing to her.

(. . . and a bit more . . .)

How could that be when she was the very breath in his body, the very reason for his heart to continue beating in its unnatural rhythm somewhere between heaven and hell?

The scent of her lingered. The perfume she wore had passed from her tender skin to his hand, and he inhaled deeply until intoxicated by fragrant memory. Violets. Her favorite. The delicate bouquet had teased him through centuries, quickening his hopes, his desires, his dreams.

She was here. And she would be his at last.

And he would never, ever let her go again.

I’ve just gotten back from a wonderful weekend filled with friends and fiction at a writers’ retreat in Grand Haven, Michigan. It reminded me of how much I need my writing time (even though I spent the weekend editing a romantic suspense that I started at LAST year’s write in!). It was a small group this year, just seven of us all working on vastly different projects but the energy was palpable. I came home with a completed revision and, unfortunately, a miserable cold. Worth it!

Now, to get back to work at my own desk . . .

♚♚♚♚♚
Nancy Gideon on the Web



Tuesday, August 16, 2022

Do You Need to Have Writing Goals?

Becoming a writer is such a strange phenomenon. You start out just wanting to tell a story, and that soon evolves into wanting to tell it better, so you dive head-first into craft books and classes.  Then you get fussy over character development. After that, you start thinking about your writer's voice and style. And before you know it, more established writers are asking you about goals.

If you're going to be a writer, do you have to have goals?

The short answer is yes! But don't close out of this blog post just yet.

Yes, you do need to have goals, but your goals don't have to be about money or fame. Remember that you sat down and started writing a story because you wanted to tell a story. That was your goal. Sure, your writing goals have grown and shrunk over the time that you've worked on your writer's toolbox (skills and techniques), but your overall goal has stayed the same. You want to tell a story.

Now, there's nothing wrong with wanting to tell a story that is also profitable. That's a great goal too, but what I often see as I bounce from writing conferences to retreats is that the writers talking at these events are usually talking about making money with their stories. Again, this is a great goal, but it's not everyone's overall writing goal. Some people just want to tell stories, and that's a GREAT goal to have as well.

Just because we don't have the same overall goals doesn't mean that we can't work together as a community. There are so many good ideas and writing tips out there, and while one of those tips is having a writing goal, I wanted to validate all sides of the writing world regardless of your long-term goals.

Some of us want to write short stories, while others only write novels. You're all fabulous!

Still others want to remodel their kitchens off the money they make from their stories. To which I say, You go writing friend!

To those who love to write fanfic because they were that invested in a story. I see you, and keep it up!

Writing friends who haven't fallen in love with a singular genre, so you keep trying out new ones. Go you!

To the awesome humans who write every day, yay! And to those who don't: those words are coming!

And to anyone in between, your goal was to tell a story, and that is the loveliest goal of all.

Happy writing.


 

Thursday, August 4, 2022

Productive Procrastination...or Eat the Frog

 

By Maureen Bonatch



The first time I heard ‘eat the frog’, I had the same grimace you’re wearing now if you’re unfamiliar with the meaning of this expression. Now I can say it with ease without making that face—until today when I saw a similar reference for avoiding procrastination that referenced ‘eat an elephant beetle’. This left me wondering why eating something most unpleasant seems to be the motivator for preventing procrastination. 


Both of these expressions refer to that task that we put off. You know the one. 

It needs to be done, but it might feel like a lot of work, or there’s something easier or more enjoyable that you’d rather do first. Often this leads to many other little tasks that get completed while that big ole’ frog is still sitting there ribbit-ing at you to pay attention to it. (I am not sure what sound an elephant beetle makes. After taking a peek at a picture of one of those buggers, I’d prefer not to eat that either.)

Avoidance

Sometimes in avoidance, I’ll tackle many tadpole tasks, so it feels like I’m getting something done. Although in the back of my mind, I knew that the giant frog would be waiting for me tomorrow. 


Writing this blog right now is one way I avoid finishing the last 15 thousand words of a story draft. As a panster (a writer who outlines little but instead writes by the seat of her pants), sometimes the words flow like a flood, while other times I sit waiting for the character to tell me what happens next. And sometimes, those stubborn fools just don’t want to share. Or I think I know what’s coming up, and they laugh at the choppy words that are later deleted. 

Productive Procrastination

Many who aren’t authors envision days of just writing the words. Ahh…we writers know there are days like that, but usually, that’s not every day since there are sooo many other tasks that need to be addressed. 


It’s easy to avoid a big task by detouring to other little jobs that still need doing. Things like reworking or writing a blurb, making ads, making graphics, editing, social media posting, looking for book covers, and listening to educational podcasts or other courses… Or—oh—start this new shiny story because it’s so much better than the current one. The last is my current dilemma. Some other characters want their story started.


But alas, this list of ways to procrastinate is endless. Doing these might help to feel productive, but the frog? Yep. Still waiting. 

Working Through Procrastination

The idea of eating a frog (or a huge beetle) is to start the day by tackling the most dreaded task first …and then complete the other tasks without the weight of that task dragging you down. 


The key is finding what works to provide enough motivation to get it done, such as:


  • Find something tastier than a frog: Decide upon a reward for yourself
  • Hide from the tadpoles: Minimize distractions by shutting down social media and other windows
  • Face the frog: Admit you’ve been procrastinating, and then tackle it
  • Make a deal with the frog: Commit to completing the task- tell a friend for accountability 
  • Picture giving the frog the boot: Change dread to the excitement of imagining how you’ll feel once it’s done
  • Magically turn the frog into tadpoles: Break it into smaller tasks, so it’s not as overwhelming


Who Starts the Day Eating the Frog? Or How Do You Deal with Procrastination?

Psst! Here’s some cool things to procrastinate with! 


A Cagey CATastrophe is available for Preorder- click right here to check it out!




Look-ey, Look-ey! It's a Giveaway! Check it out by clicking right here.



Did someone say Free Cozy Mysteries? Click right here to check them out!


M.L. Bonatch believes music can be paired with every mood, laughter is contagious, and caffeine and wine are essential for survival. When she’s not doing the bidding of a feisty Shih Tzu, she’s a mom to twin daughters, exploring the beautiful woods of PA with her hubby and dancing as much as possible. She writes paranormal cozy mysteries as  M.L. Bonatch, paranormal romance and other genres as Maureen Bonatch, and her latest urban fantasy as Amber Wrath.


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Thursday, July 14, 2022

A Question for Writers, Published or Not

 

He's only here to get your attention.  :-)

I have been working on another western romance—and working, and working…It seems endless, and I’m only shooting for 50,000 words.  Why do you persist (other than sheer stubbornness, you mean?)? I’m under contract to write this book.  I use every excuse not to work on it.  Yesterday, I found an old story I’d written back in the dark ages, and happily, joyfully even, worked on it until late at night.  You know that feeling when you’re writing for the joy of writing? I had this yesterday with my little vampire story.

And it struck me.

I’ve always, by and large, written paranormal stories.  The one I worked on yesterday was a vampire ditty. My western romance doesn’t have even one preternatural being. (I borrowed preternatural from Anne Rice; she probably borrowed it from the Thesaurus. I mean who says “preternatural”?)

I had to be dragged away from the computer and that story had a vampire as the hero. I was back in my element and happy writing. That hasn’t happened often lately. And this story dates back to when I thought GMC was an SUV. I don’t remember where I was going in my ramblings. CRS.

I put it to you, ladies and gentlemen of the jury, if you are a writer, should you take any topic and write well or do you prefer to stick with those things you love?

That little story has become a new KindleVella offering. I called it The Pariah. You can read the first 3 episodes free. But as of this writing there are only 2. Get all your preternatural friends onboard, read my vampire tale, and if they like what they’ve read, I’d appreciate a Thumbs-up at the conclusion of the 3rd episode.*


https://www.amazon.com/The-Pariah/dp/B0B6CX46ZW/

*Light Bulb – if not the moral to this post, it was at least a message.

Happy Thursday, July 14th,

 Linda Nightingale

 

Wednesday, May 25, 2022

Happy Birthday to Me from Obi-Wan and Stranger Things! by Nancy Gideon

How did they know this was just what I wanted?! It’s as if the Universe knew how to turn a new year into a glorious celebration. A new year for me, that is, as I turn sixty-(mumble, mumble) on Friday. After a dearth of reruns for the past two years, FINALLY a flood of new stuff to inspire this fiction writer’s soul!


 As much as I adore falling into a good book, having a good story appear on the small screen, walking and talking, has always been the creative gold standard to me. From the early days of Black & White on two channels where the fam huddled around that huge cabinet while my dad fussed with the antenna, to more channels than I’ve had birthdays to click on or stream, television (and to a lesser, more expensive extent, movies) stirred the writer’s imagination in me.

What if . . . ?

My curiosity always leapt beyond what I had in front of me. What if money could grow on the trees in my backyard? What if Harry had never met Sally? What if the South won the Civil War? What if computers took over the world? What if I could go back in time? What if I was stranded on a deserted island with only seven things and Harrison Ford was one of them?

My greatest fear about getting older is losing that sense of curiosity. That need to know and explore and ask questions (other than “What day is this?” or “Did I remember to put on pants?”). I’m not ready to worry, yet. Because I still have other planets to explore, other lives to live, other books to read (and write!). And other meals to make . . . which is where I have to head in a few minutes before the cats decide they are going to starve, and they’d better start feasting on my bare feet!)

So, my birthday wish for me (and for you, as they come up on the calendar)? An endless supply of imagine! And that excitement that comes along with it!

Here’s to new adventures and the places they take us!!
♚♚♚♚♚
Nancy Gideon on the Web



Wednesday, May 4, 2022

Whatcha Talkin’ Bout, Willis?

 By Maureen Bonatch

“Once I finish redding up the house ‘N at do yinz’ want to run down to the state store?”


You might be from Pennsylvania if you read—and understood—that sentence without hesitation. Many of us use local slang without considering that it may only be understood by those in the area. Or while you’re traveling your slang, or the accent that you didn’t realize you had, may help others place your home town. 


But what happens when slang, or unusual terms, are used in a story?



Keep it Simple Silly

As a writer, using key terms for an area might help it make the story feel more authentic, but if you overdo it, then it can pull the reader out of a story. 


As a reader, learning new words and expressions while reading can be enjoyable—until you have to stop to google a term. 


Being pulled out of the story can take away from the scene and leave the reader feeling confused, or with the need to re-read the paragraph. 

Consider Other Options

If you really want to add in some slang, consider having another character rephrase so the definition is in the story and the reader doesn’t have to go searching. 


“It will take you forever to finish cleaning up the house. Besides, we have plenty of liquor here. What else did you want from the state store?”


Other authors might add a glossary of terms for reference. 

You Might Be From PA if…

I might use a few terms or pronunciations specific to Pennsylvanians, but not all of these. How many are you familiar with?


  • Buggy
  • Warsh
  • Crick
  • Shush
  • Gum Bands
  • Hoagie
  • Jagoff
  • Sweeper
  • Philly
  • Djeetyet?
  • Yinz 
  • Youns
  • Dippy eggs
  • Wooder
  • Gutchies
  • Dahntahn
  • Gesundheit
  • Slippy
  • Babushka
  • Pop
  • Scrapple

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Just a small-town girl, Maureen Bonatch leads a double life. She lives in a magical world as a novelist, and as a nurse leader in reality. Maureen’s first novella was a paranormal romance published when blogs were a new-fangled thing. She’s since changed her focus to writing paranormal cozy mysteries as M.L. Bonatch and urban fantasy as Maureen Bonatch. 


While she’s not busy writing or doing nurse-things, she’s a mom to her twin daughters, bicycling in the beautiful woods of PA with her hubby, doing the bidding of a feisty Shih Tzu, and dancing as much as possible. She believes music can be paired with every mood, laughter is contagious, and that caffeine and wine are essential for survival.


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