New
Beginnings: A writing tip to snag that elusive publishing contract.
So you’ve finished
your manuscript…yay! Way to go!
No, seriously, it’s an
awesome accomplishment to have poured your heart and soul onto paper (or
screen), created memorable characters, and devised a plot twisting story. So
kudos to you.
Maybe along the way
you’ve had it critiqued, entered a few contests for feedback, and edited it to
hell and back, lovingly polishing into a shiny patina.
***rubs
hand together with an evil gleam in your eye saying, ‘muwhahahaha’***
(Not the visual you’d
use? I write paranormal, so I tend to go with the evil witch-type visual, use
whatever suits you!)
What!? You haven’t
polished your manuscript yet?
Well, do it now. Go ahead…I’ll
wait.
Tick, tock. Tick,
tock.
Done?
Okay, good.
Next…research editors
and agents. Find one’s who’ll be interested in your story. Stalk them. Yes, I
said stalk them, but not in the creepy kind of way…just observe. Find them on their
blogs,
…they’re there. Most will be
posting about books they want to represent, or books they love, which is your
clue as to whether you should send your baby to them or keep looking.
Done
that? Good.
No, it’s not good, you say. You’ve received a
gazillion rejection letters, had your hopes so high in the clouds only to fall
down into the deepest of gutters.
*Sigh* Been there,
done that.
Forty seven times! Yes, you heard me right…47 times, 47 hopes dashed with 47 rejection letters.
Every writer has been
there, maybe not as many times as myself, but they’ve been there. It’s part of
the business of writing. A sucky part, but a part none the less.
*Kathryn Stockett’s,
The Help, was rejected 60 times before becoming a bestseller.
* Stephen King’s,
Carrie, was rejected dozens of times.
*John Grishim’s, A
Time to Kill, was rejected by a dozen publishers and 16 agents.
*Margaret Mitchell’s,
Gone With the Wind, was rejected 38 times.
WE ARE NOT ALONE!
You think you’ll never
sign on the elusive dotted line of the much coveted publishing contract, right?
Wrong!
Put on your big
girl/boy pants, take a deep breath, and listen closely.
BE
STUBBORN, BUT FLEXIBLE.
You’re probably saying
to yourself ‘What the heck is she talking about?’
Well, I’ll tell you.
Be STUBBORN…never give
up!
You may have received 10, 20, even 30 or more rejections and thought nobody wants my baby. And that may be true…for now, or it may not. It may be you just haven’t found the right fit, or your genre is saturated (those who write paranormal, like myself, will relate to this), or…
You
haven’t been FLEXIBLE enough.
Now you’re saying,
‘Sophia, you just told me to be stubborn, how can I be flexible?”
Here comes the meat of
this post, and hopefully the tip that will take your manuscript from unsellable
to signed contract. It’s what I did, and my debut paranormal romance novel,
Protect Her, will be released October 2014 from Soul Mate Publishing. (Yes, a
little unashamed self-promotion here)
Get on with it,
Sophia!
Okay, here goes…
Give your manuscript a
new beginning!
Whoa there, crazy
lady. Do you know how long I put into my beginning? It’s had the most edits,
polishing, and critiques, and now you want me to rewrite it? That’s just looney
tunes!
No, I don’t want you
to rewrite it,
Put
your finger on that big delete button, or click on the cut and paste
feature, and get rid of your prologue, and first 1-3 chapters. (Save them in
another document first, I’ll tell you why later)
Oh my, this lady it
totally nuts.
My sanity is beside
the point here folks, the method to my madness however is not, and I’ll tell
you why.
1.
Most editors and agents hate prologues.
2.
The first few chapters are most often
full of backstory, and thus, boring to the reader.
How do I do this?
To
give you an example I’ll use Twilight, as most of us have read or seen the
movie.
It starts out when
Bella moves to Forks. That’s the exact moment her life changes, when the story
begins.
But what if Stephanie
Meyer had done something like this:
Prologue: Bella is a
child in a dance studio. She’s klutzy and her mother’s filming her trying to
dance, but she’s terrible at it. We find out her parents are divorced, but
Bella’s mother is loving.
Chapter one: Years
later, Bella’s at her house in Arizona trying to decide if she should move to
Forks. We meet her mother and her mother’s boyfriend, and find out what her
life is like there.
Chapter two: She’s at the
airport in Arizona in a long drawn out emotional scene saying goodbye to her
mother. Maybe the baseball-playing boyfriend is in the background checking his
watch because he has to get to Florida for spring training. Then Bella gets on
the plane and flies away to Forks and meets her father at the airport in
Washington where we have pages upon pages of her settling into her new life and we learn about her past.
Chapter three: We
finally meet Edward.
What’s wrong with that
beginning? It’s boring. We don’t care about her dance studio days, because we
won’t find out its significance until much later in the story. And we don’t
know Bella at all yet, so we won’t feel all that emotion when she’s at the
airport with her mother in a chapter long scene. We don’t really care about her
settling into the house with her father. Yes, we want a few tidbits for
setting, but not a whole chapter.
We want to meet Edward.
We want to meet Edward.
Twilight begins with a
half page long preface and this first sentence:
“I’d
never given much thought to how I would die-though I’d had reason enough in the
last few months-but even if I had, I would not have imagined it like this.”
Sucks you right in,
makes you wonder what the heck is going to happen. No backstory. Turn the page.
In chapter one, we
find out with a line or two about her relationship with her mother, what Bella
looks like, that she hates where she’s moving and that she’s estranged from her
father. Just little bits of info tucked in here and there, then partway through the chapter…
She meets Edward.
We don’t find out
about her dancing days until much later in the book when she’s at her old dance
studio about to be killed by a vampire when it’s relevant. We don’t find out
the full dynamic of her relationship with her parents until it’s sprinkled in
throughout the story, adding layers.
Had Stephanie Meyer written it the way I had, we would have been bored. We would have wanted to get
to her meeting Edward. That’s where the story begins. Make sense?
Okay…start reading your
manuscript from chapter 2, 3 or 4. See if it makes since. Does the
action/dilemma start there? See if you can take any of the relevant information
you have in those cut chapters and sprinkle it in later.
Like where your main
character grew up, or what happened to them as a child that makes them the way
they are. Are your first chapter or two leading up to when the actual story
begins?
Start your book where
the book starts, not what leads up to it. What I mean is, get rid of the
backstory, the story that came before the story you’re trying to tell. All
those needed details of the characters lives that came before the actual story
your telling can usually, with success, be added as a line or two here or there
throughout the rest of your manuscript.
This keeps the reader
guessing (and turning the pages), and keeps the story interesting as we read on
wanting to know why the character is the way they are, but also we’re in the
story, the here and now of it.
Most new authors,
myself included, tend to think we need it all in the beginning or the reader
won’t know everything they need to about our characters. And there may be a few
things we need to know, but most often, this information needs to come later. Start
the story in the thick of it, get to the good stuff NOW. Add the other things a
little at a time throughout the story.
That’s it!
Once you’ve done that
and polished your story back into its illustrious shine, find new agents and
editors to send your baby to, and see what happens.
Remember those 47 rejections I told you about? I cut, the prologue and first two chapters of my
story, and had 3 contract offers in one week. Yes 3!
Then I had the problem
of deciding which publishing house I wanted to go with. A problem I loved
having!
I’m not saying this is
guaranteed to work for you, but if you’ve had more rejections than you’re
comfortable with having, it’s worth a try, and you just may find that elusive
contract in your inbox one day.
What do you do with
the chapters you cut and saved? Well, I sent them to my editor, really hoping
she’d say yes, we have to have these in the book. Those chapters were the first
thing I’d written, I loved those chapters. What did she say? Nope, nadda, don’t
need them.
However, I didn’t get
rid of them just yet…I used them in other ways. I wrote a character interview
with one, and I plan on having a deleted scene or two on my website. Sooo, you
can still use them, just not in your book!
If you get anything
out of this post, I hope you learn…
1.
NEVER GIVE UP!
2.
IF YOU’RE NOT GETTING A CONTRACT OFFER,
CONSIDER A NEW BEGINNING.
3.
NEVER GIVE UP!
GOOD LUCK TO YOU ALL,
SOPHIA
KIMBLE
8 comments:
Great post Sophia! Very inspiring.
Aww, thank you!
Very good post. My first book went through a similar slice and dice, and now that I'm on book 3, it may have finally stuck. I like to think being an author is a true test of humility. When am I being true to my art versus when am I just being too stubborn by not taking criticism.
I couldn't agree more, Jessica. As I wrote book two of my series, I kept having to stop myself from adding too much backstory, but thank goodness I caught most of it, and my critique partners caught the rest. :)
Thanks for stopping by!
Great post, Sophia. I hate cutting my ms, even when I know it's for the best.
I know, Diane...it's so very hard to snip away at your baby!
Inspiring post! Thanks for sharing, Sophia :)
Thank Joanne! :)
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